Thursday, 13 February 2014

Feeback

I posted my animatronics storyboard onto facebook and gained a small amount of feedback.




Adam is currently studying media within the film industry at university and is in his 3rd year. He has worked as an audio assistant on many different film sets and is currently editing his own movie that he has put together with other students. He has given me some very good feedback. I did not explain very well in my post that this is meant to be an opening scene to a feature film rather than a short film, however this shows me that i may need to be careful with the plot as it could give off mixed signals. I am very happy that he noticed that there will not be any if not no dialogue which is a major feature of my idea. And, he also thinks that my plot fits my genre which is very encouraging.
After reviewing the feedback, I realise that i need to make sure my scene does not have a specific ending and will leave the audience wanting more otherwise they may feel that it is a short film rather than an opening scene to a film. Also, adam seems to think that this will be 3-4 minutes long and i think i will cut down the amount of things i include in this scene.

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