1- check 'cogs the gun'. Good sense of purpose of a film opening with some good analysis. It would benefit from a direct comparison to an RMA - 9 frames could be used for this too. Purpose and c and cs could be linked further and more ref to genre. Good draft.
2 and 3 - text is difficult to read. I'm confused why you have joined these in a website - it seems strange. Question 2 isn't really rep of social groups. It's related slightly when you mention class but very underdeveloped with lots of unrelated points.
3 - check capital i. Text heavy. Good use of stats. What about 'other' methods of distribution after cinema?
4 and 5 - basic and brief. Look at ocr weebly and other question 4 and 5s to help add detail.
6 - bit vague. Descriptive. Identify what you have learnt and how this benefitted the product.
7 - good attempt at a 'different' ict method. However you don't really answer the question. You only mention 2 things that you have learnt, 'use a tripod' and include a 'variety of shots'. Mostly analysis that would fit question 1. You must answer the question. Again use other egs to help you.
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